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I found out today,
That I live in a black
And White movie. A
True, undeniable classic.

The clouds, the grass,
Everything in shades of
Grey. Without exception,
Everything is monochromatic.

I've walked down the streets
Watching the black and white
Sun set on the black and white
Horizon with no changes in hue.

I've found, though, that through
This one-sided life, I've begun
To see all the details that I
Would have missed in full saturation.

But then, something changed.
Every once in a while, something
Would pop up into my view,
Adding bits of blue and green.

I'm not sure if I like it yet,
He's begun to give me yellows
And lots of red. There is something
Something, messing with my head.

And right now, I'm forced to view
The full spectrum of color,
Dripping out of the sky in momentary
Splashes of bright pigment.

So when the world goes back to being
Grey, I find myself missing the color
That he brings with him when
He visits, even just for a few minutes.

Right now, there is a flower, terribly
Blue, I know, that he has left behind.
Something he has forgotten to take
With him when he goes where ever he goes.

Maybe it was intentional,
Maybe he drips me in chromatic intensity and then
Licks it away because he knows that soon
I'll grow weary of black and white.


And demand him in full technicolor.
©2006-2009 ~Vera-Yevtushenko
:iconvera-yevtushenko:

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:icondarkcrawler:
I liked the idea. I even saw the sunset, all grainy and, by being colorless, somehow slower. However, I don't think the layout you gave it corresponds to the way it is written. Although there are beautiful images, I don't think this form suits it; perhaps it would be a bit more functional as prose.

It's great to read you again Vera.

--
"It has always been the prerrogative of half-wits and children to point out that the Emperor has no clothes, but the half-wit remains a half-wit, and the Emperor remains an Emperor."
:iconvera-yevtushenko:
You are usually right, ya know?

This actually started out originally as prose.

--
"I read somewhere that if given a choice between sex and peace of mind," she said, "Most people would choose peace."

"Personally," I said, "I do fine with a little anxiety." [link]
:icondarkcrawler:
randomness is my friend :D

It would be a good exercise to ask yourself why did you give it the form of a poem. Perhaps you felt that, as prose, it lacked intensity or sufficiently dense images, perhaps it lacked rythm... I don't know. It started as prose and was written as such. If you made it a poem, would it remain the same?

It seems like this prose has a twin sister, a poem. :)

--
"It has always been the prerrogative of half-wits and children to point out that the Emperor has no clothes, but the half-wit remains a half-wit, and the Emperor remains an Emperor."
:iconlarka--firewind:
I like how you describe the black and white world especially in this piece :)

--
"what is the dancer without the dance, or the dreamer without the dream?"-The Summer Tree

think of me long enough to make a memory.

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